Thursday, February 25, 2010

Ralph the Mouse

Danielle
Essay 3
ELA 8th Grade
If there was a mouse in my house this evening, it would be named Ralph. If it ran down the hall and and looked around the rooms it would see in my living room our white walls, with the light overhead. The computers in the corners, the T.V. in the front of the room against the wall. The Coffee Table would be in the middle of the room, the front door witch we use rarely, an island table in the middle of the kitchen-oh no a cat!!!
The  cat would chase after Ralph and try to get him. If the cat (Raphael) failed he would go for back up. While Ralph hid in the the cabinet in our hallway in between a can of Spaghetti O’s and a can of Corn. Ralph would try and think of a way out, without rousing the cats.
Meanwhile, the would have got its backup, Cinnamon Boots and Sheba, it would return to the cabinet in the hallway. For they had thought up a plan to.             They would send Sheba in, she’s a very ambitious kitten, to gain a little trust from the mouse. The pounce on it and call in the cats, with a small meow.
  I was surprised when I saw this oh so very surprised. The cats came in, but Ralph was smarter, he escaped. He knew what they were gonna do from the beginning. He planned everything out. He ran as soon as they came. He lived. Hooray!!!
A car pulled into the drive way. We had arrived. He scurried out side and we kept him as a pet in a little tank and feed him, where Ralph constantly taunted the cats on how he got away.

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